RIVERS, arielle

[sarah]

TALE AS OLD AS TIME;

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Arielle Leanna Rivers[/center]

BIBBIDI-BOBBIDI-BOO;

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• HELLO, MY NAME IS Arielle Leanna Rivers.
  
• BUT YOU CAN CALL ME Ari, Ariel.
  
• I'M age in words 20
  
• MEANING I'M A Junior.
  
• I'M A female,
  
• WHO'S INTERESTED IN males.
  
• I'M MAJORING IN Theatre/Acting.
  
• SOMETIMES, I'M TOLD I RESEMBLE Ariel.
  
  

GOD HELP THE OUTCASTS;

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• MY POSITIVE TRAITS ARE
  • Kind
    
  • Honest
    
  • Caring
    
  • Easy to get along with
    
  • Smart
    
  .
  
• MY NEGATIVE TRAITS ARE
  • Short temper
    
  • Curious/Nosey
    
  • Headstrong sometimes
    
  .
  
  
• I LIKE
  • Flowers
    
  • Animals
    
  • Beaches
    
  • Children
    
  • School
    
  • Singing
    
  • Dancing
    
  • Acting
    
  .
  
• I DISLIKE
  • Meat(including fish)
    
  • Snobs
    
  • Perverts
    
  • Math
    
  • Social Studies
    
  • Gossip
    
  .
  
  
• MY GREATEST GOAL IN LIFE IS To become one of the greatest Actresses.
  
• MY GREATEST FEAR IN LIFE IS Lose everything she has worked for.
  

I WANNA BE LIKE YOU;

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• I HAVE red HAIR.
  
• I HAVE blue EYES.
  
  
• I WEIGH 120 POUNDS.
  
• I STAND 5'5" HIGH.
  

REFLECTION;

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• OKAY, SO HERE'S HOW MY HISTORY GOES: Arielle was born 20 years ago on the day of June 12th. Her mother died from child birth after Ariels birth, so she was raised by her father and older sisters. She was born into a "middle class" family. They weren't rich, but they weren't poor. They were actually pretty well off and because she was the youngest, she was the most spoiled. Even though she got a lot she didn't take it to heart. She always shared and didn't make it seem like she was any better than anyone else.
  
  When Ariel was around 15 she discovered that she liked the art of acting. She watched a lot of shows and studied the art. A few years later, she ended up finding out about Wonderland Academy and she got her father to let her go there. She has been there for a couple years and is now a Junior there. She has been keeping up with the art of theatre and is also taking up some singing too.
  

SOMEWHERE OUT THERE;

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• THIS IS HOW MY SCHEDULE GOES;
  
• SEMESTER ONE-
  PERIOD ONE; Choir
  PERIOD TWO; Junior Math
  PERIOD THREE; Junior Science
  PERIOD FOUR; Spanish
  
  
• SEMESTER TWO-
  PERIOD ONE; Junior Social Studies
  PERIOD TWO; Junior English
  PERIOD THREE; Junior PE&Health
  PERIOD FOUR; Theatre/Acting

PART OF YOUR WORLD;

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• MY REAL NAME/ALIAS IS Sarah.
  
• I'M REALLY 15 YEARS OLD.
  
• I'VE BEEN RPING FOR About 2 years.
  

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[anabelle thompson]

unaccepted ,

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COMMENTS; Alrighty, where to begin? One of the first reasons your application was not accepted was that your sentence structure and grammar doesn't quite fit in with our literate to advanced grammar. That doesn't mean that you won't develop it! Sooner or later you will. Just keep rping and eventually it'll come to you. Another reason was that you really didn't capture the essence of that particular Disney characters. It was sort of flat and without personality. Arial should be more than just an average, middle class girl that enjoys acting. Perhaps her father and her don't talk anymore or something along those lines. And because of those two reasons, I'm afraid I'm not going to accept this application. I'm sorry and I hope you don't take it too personally. It's just we'd like to mantain our 'literaite to advanced' title. Good luck in the future with your rping! And don't forget to keep practicing with your grammar. =]

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